TyLee and Takoda poem(Need Comments and Critiques)

1. Ty Lee when I first met you my heart had to flee for I was afraid you'd never love me in that same way.

2. When were together my heart is full when we are apart my life is dull. I can never picture a night where I don't look up at the stars and pray to see you in my sights.

3. You are sweet inside and out I'd die for your love that is no doubt.

4. If you were mine I would not terrie heck you are the girl I would love to merry.

5. I Just wish we were not of a different race I'd give it all up for your lips I would love to taste.

6. I may have fur and you may have skin.. but we both have the same blood and feelings within.

7. I gave my spirit in a way of a blessing so that maybe I could become human for your impressing.

8. For your love I will go far.. I'd even face Koh in a battle so hard. If I were to lose my face my feelings for you will never be disgraced.

9. In my soul hear me now my love is in my heart and to you it is my vow.

10. You are the wind beneath my wings all I ask is you take my heart by its strings and love me until the worst should bring. I will always love you Ty Lee both in my head and in my heart may the spirits never keep us apart.